WEEK 2: FORMAL INTRODUCTORY LETTER (REVISED)
Dear Professor Brad,
My name is Moong Yen Jee and I am writing to introduce myself
to you. I am currently pursuing a degree in civil engineering at the Singapore
Institute of Technology (SIT). I earned a diploma in civil engineering with
business from Singapore Polytechnic (SP). The fact that I can speak Cantonese
well is an intriguing truth about me.
Since young, mathematics has been my favourite subject as I
have always found the calculation of numbers, logical equations, and solving
mathematical problems to be fascinating. My ambition to utilise logic and math
to come up with creative solutions to modern-day problems is what motivated me
to pursue a career in engineering. I made the decision to continue my
engineering studies because I was keen in the structural side of engineering
and was motivated by my father, who has been employed in the field for a long
time, after observing the positive effects he had on those around him.
One of my communication strengths is the ability to react
quickly and flexibly while providing accurate and detailed feedback. I can rely
on my rapid thinking skills to adjust quickly and reorient my replies so that
they match those shifting circumstances because I am frequently confronted with
abrupt and unexpected queries during presentations. Even though I am an
outspoken and outgoing person, I nevertheless experience performance anxiety in
formal settings since I am easily shaken up by intimidating crowds and find
myself stuttering over my words.
Through this module, I aim to be able to enhance my technical
writing skills in reports and reflections. I am also looking forward to
improving my public speaking abilities through active participation in class
and discovering fresh concepts and ideas that will enable me to see the world
from a wider perspective. I have no doubt that the information I learned in
this module will be useful and significant for my career in the workforce.
I stand out from the crowd attributable to my curiosity and
aptitude for rapid environmental adaptation. Because of my curiosity, I was
capable of keeping up with the norms while constantly working to accomplish
positive outcomes.
Yours sincerely,
Moong Yen Jee (Ms)
Thank you for the effort in revision, YenJee.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the feedback Professor Brad.
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